christchurch earthquake reflection

Christchurch Earthquake

Plates

I am here alone

I am small yet I am powerful

I am amazing

But I am lonely

I am the one that is empty inside

I am the one that caused chaos like

I am the one that’s heart is broken

I am the one running from what I caused

I am the one with tears emerging

I am the one who suffers guilt

I am grief

The lost

We fell to our knees

Yet our living love lifted us up

The cars sank like a rock in the water

Yet our love kept us up

We were lost

But our love helped us find our way

We were gone

Yet our love kept us alive

We may not be here

But our love kept us here

We may have had our final breath

But our shall keep us going longer

This talks about the sadness and life’s lost in the Christchurch 

Underline means I changed it to add language features such
as simile and more.

Green and red were already there.  

Harrier Hawk reflection

Harrier Hawk

For fix’s

For better words

The man sat atop the castle it wasn’t much of a hassle

And rrrp pepepepepee the harrier hawk said

The man was ignorant he made bad decisions and would suffer crucial consequences.

And rrrp pepepepepee the harrier hawk said

The man was all the way at the top but his rank started to fall past all.

And rrrp pepepepepee the harrier hawk said

His castle was gone from his reach he tried to get in but the door was locked.

And rrrp pepepepepee the harrier hawk said

The man had reached the bottom he had everything but now it was gone because what he had done was wrong.

And rrrp pepepepepee the harrier hawk said

Now he is gone when his name is mentioned no one knows who he was or where he ventured.

And rrrp pepepepepee the harrier hawk said

Reflection: This shows what can happen when the king made decisions he didn’t think he’d have to face his consequences he suffered them frightfully 

I used this because I didn’t think it made sense otherwise

I added these because I thought there should be better words