Christchurch Earthquake
Plates
I am here alone
I am small yet I am powerful
I am amazing
But I am lonely
I am the one that is empty inside
I am the one that caused chaos like
I am the one that’s heart is broken
I am the one running from what I caused
I am the one with tears emerging
I am the one who suffers guilt
I am grief
The lost
We fell to our knees
Yet our living love lifted us up
The cars sank like a rock in the water
Yet our love kept us up
We were lost
But our love helped us find our way
We were gone
Yet our love kept us alive
We may not be here
But our love kept us here
We may have had our final breath
But our shall keep us going longer
This talks about the sadness and life’s lost in the Christchurch
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