Harrier Hawk
For fix’s
For better words
The man sat atop the castle it wasn’t much of a hassle
And rrrp pepepepepee the harrier hawk said
The man was ignorant he made bad decisions and would suffer crucial consequences.
And rrrp pepepepepee the harrier hawk said
The man was all the way at the top but his rank started to fall past all.
And rrrp pepepepepee the harrier hawk said
His castle was gone from his reach he tried to get in but the door was locked.
And rrrp pepepepepee the harrier hawk said
The man had reached the bottom he had everything but now it was gone because what he had done was wrong.
And rrrp pepepepepee the harrier hawk said
Now he is gone when his name is mentioned no one knows who he was or where he ventured.
And rrrp pepepepepee the harrier hawk said
Reflection: This shows what can happen when the king made decisions he didn’t think he’d have to face his consequences he suffered them frightfully
I used this because I didn’t think it made sense otherwise
I added these because I thought there should be better words
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